some third party opinion. i only have the first verse and the chorus
thought, here it is:
stand up while
you still have the strength
if im too weak to pick you up
a hundred miles
cant compare in length
and a hundred years is not enough
to give you all
of me
to show you all
the best in life is free
i dont want you to be a distant memory
im giving my all, all of me
i appreciate all feedback, criticism is encouraged. thanks :)
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